Astral Poetry
My dumb ass read Enceladus as enchiladas.
Boombada connect everyone let’s gooo
Solar wind lifting your hair??!
Our loneliness eclipsing Avalon??!
gtfo here in a good way
Yes! I’m so fond of astral poetry. The desert, our rockets, our radiation. Beautiful.
Let’s keep it going!
This is pretty fucking good
My favorite part was, “Rockets have thoughts, we have our lives — across Tucson, an entire city violently thrusts toward an urban black hole.” INCREDIBLE!!!
Holy shit. You are a worthy teacher, Ian. This is explosive.
The visual spacing + cosmic imagery makes this read like a fractured constellation. Really powerful.
Title line still managed to utterly fuck me up after so much movement in the poetry. Damn.
incredible
The desert is dead in all of us! Amazing. First time seeing you post a poem since I joined from a year of following on YouTube. 🙏
WOW! Cool poem I imagine you sliding side to side in socks while saying this. Awesome ur a fuckin genius with words and their placement bro! Wow!
I really enjoyed:
"another Space X
launch
splits open
the sky"
Man repeatedly proves its destructive capabilities on nature and it is presented as fascination.
Cool stuff!
Very nice, I feel dumb but how do you attach an image to the post as just a cover image but not have it within the post?
Wow that was powerful 🔥
It made me think of loneliness, uselessness, and the yearning for purpose.
Did not disappoint! My new favorite from you
My dumb ass read Enceladus as enchiladas.
Boombada connect everyone let’s gooo
Solar wind lifting your hair??!
Our loneliness eclipsing Avalon??!
gtfo here in a good way
Yes! I’m so fond of astral poetry. The desert, our rockets, our radiation. Beautiful.
Let’s keep it going!
This is pretty fucking good
My favorite part was, “Rockets have thoughts, we have our lives — across Tucson, an entire city violently thrusts toward an urban black hole.” INCREDIBLE!!!
Holy shit. You are a worthy teacher, Ian. This is explosive.
The visual spacing + cosmic imagery makes this read like a fractured constellation. Really powerful.
Title line still managed to utterly fuck me up after so much movement in the poetry. Damn.
incredible
The desert is dead in all of us! Amazing. First time seeing you post a poem since I joined from a year of following on YouTube. 🙏
WOW! Cool poem I imagine you sliding side to side in socks while saying this. Awesome ur a fuckin genius with words and their placement bro! Wow!
I really enjoyed:
"another Space X
launch
splits open
the sky"
Man repeatedly proves its destructive capabilities on nature and it is presented as fascination.
Cool stuff!
Very nice, I feel dumb but how do you attach an image to the post as just a cover image but not have it within the post?
Wow that was powerful 🔥
It made me think of loneliness, uselessness, and the yearning for purpose.
Did not disappoint! My new favorite from you